添削前/Before Correction
Until my furniture arrives, I have to sleep in a sleeping bag. I have a sleeping pad and mat I use for camping underneath. Since I’ve started this sleeping style, my quality of sleep has worsened. I can’t toss and turn because the width of the forming pad is too narrow to move around. I also fall off the foaming pad a lot, and this often wakes me up unfortunately.
添削後/After Correction
Until my furniture arrives, I have to sleep in a sleeping bag. I use a foam sleeping pad and a camping mat underneath it. Since I started sleeping this way, the quality of my sleep has gotten worse. I can’t move around much during the night because the sleeping pad is too narrow. I also tend to roll off it quite often, which unfortunately wakes me up.
家具が届くまで、寝袋で寝なければいけない。寝袋の下には、エアーマット、フォームパッドを敷いている。こうやって寝るようになってから、睡眠の質が悪化した。エアーマットの幅が狭いので、動くことができない。さらによくエアーマットから落っこちてしまい、残念ながら起きてしまう。
メモ
◆エアーマットは高さがないので fall off じゃなくて roll off