添削前/Before Correction
You need to get off the app. It’s addicting, and consuming your energy. Maybe you can start something small. How about taking a break for a week? You might have an itch at first, but you’ll soon get used to it.
添削後/After Correction
You need to get off the app. It’s addictive and is draining your energy. Maybe you could start with something small. How about taking a break for a week? You might feel the urge to use it at first, but you’ll soon get used to being without it.
メモ
◆energy は consume しない →consume を使いたい場合、consume much of your time など
◆addictive vs. addicting →今後の課題。違いが明確に分からなかった